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Abaddon by heeeeman Abaddon by heeeeman
The final pic from this series of 3 Ive been submitting these past 3 days.

This one was from the top of a hill in Amanohashidatte, Kyoto, Japan.

You'll notice that when you place the 3 together the amount of white increases from left to right, also the level of the horizon lowers each shot. Make of that what you will.

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:icondanuk86:
danUK86 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2015   General Artist
love the mood :)
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:iconritzninja:
RitzNinja Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Spooky.... Reminds me of that anime Higurashi no naku koro ni I love it! :)
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creativsis Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the mist in your shots. It does add to the 'abandon feeling'.
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:iconheeeeman:
heeeeman Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010  Professional Photographer
Glad you like em :)
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duesterheit Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2010
amazing. thank you so much for showing the series
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:iconheeeeman:
heeeeman Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010  Professional Photographer
No probs, thankyou for commenting :)
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Cali2007 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
This series is great. They make me feel sad =(
This one however is kind of creepin' me out haha. I love it.
I love when photos make me feel something. That's how I decide how good they are.

Great job, you know, anyway, I love your work. <3 ^.^
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:iconheeeeman:
heeeeman Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010  Professional Photographer
Thanks a bunch, I'm glad you like them :)
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:iconcali2007:
Cali2007 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
:glomp:
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hi there, just letting you know I featured this here in my journal, I hope that's okay :)
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davincipoppalag Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
This one has the mystery but not the same beauty..
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:iconheeeeman:
heeeeman Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2010  Professional Photographer
Yeah, I agree I was taken with my old camera, not as sharp. But I think it works in the series.
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:icondavincipoppalag:
davincipoppalag Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh it still fits and works ok..but the others are "more"
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B-Rox-U Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2010
... I gotta agree with :icondavincipoppalag: here... this picture does fit with the previous two pictures, same category, same ambiance, almost similar color play... but like it's said -"he's a cousin, but not my brother", this picture seemingly goes away from the previous two that you've uploaded...

... may be here are some of the reasons why -

1. The picture is clustered, the previous two were 'clean', nothing shifted the focus, nothing in the previous two were disturbing the image, this picture however, has lots of wires and poles that dominate most of the picture... if someone HAD TO say what was the subject for this picture, no one could actually say -"THIS ONE!"... trees, wires, poles, nature... they are all over the place...

2. ... lowering the horizon, for me, was a bad idea... when the sky does give the feeling of a 'misty environment', manipulation of the rest of the elements in the picture seems somewhat desperate, don't get me wrong heeeeman, this picture isn't bad, here, I'm commenting because this picture doesn't seem to 'fit' in the category of the rest two...

3. ... intention for this picture, however, is admirable... the rest two are also following a path (pun intended) and this one definitely does the same thing... that's why I'm saying -"Cousin, not my brother!", it does go along with your intention, but doesn't fulfill the aesthetics compared to the other two...

Good work, all in all, but if I had to grade this picture in comparison to the other two, I'd rate it 7 out of 10. Three points taken away for the three reasons given above...

keep up the good work... can't wait to write a critique for another one ;)
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