Your host father seems cool as shit! Great that you got to tag along and shoot this lesson.
I remember walking down the street in Kyoto... peering into an open gate, and seeing a Kendo Dojo in session. The whole scene felt like it was ripped from an Edo jidai.
I like it, but I feel like I want to see it cropped a little more to put more focus on him rather than on the surroundings. I would love to see him more to the left of the image and perhaps zoomed in more to make him larger. As it is now, his sword also goes almost right across the center of the picture, and I think if it were cropped a tiny bit more from the top (though not cutting off the clock) it would be higher up in the image and a slightly better composition. I like the gritty feel of the image. Well done!
I like this image a lot! The composition, the simplicity of the colours and the place itself and just the big free space somehow, it gives a little "alone" feeling somehow despite of the two figures on the picture. Maybe they even add to it, how they are so far from eachother... I didn't know iaido is getting less popular. But true that where I live kendo is more well-known than iaido, too.
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