And mayhaps I'm being a bit biased, but it ~does~ almost have comic book dimensions, making this feel like an excellent would-be story with lots of scope and grittiness.
- my critique - the man still looks noticeably dropped into the shot. The lighting on his body ought more closely match the lighting right around him. There's a strong blast of light hitting the ground directly behind him; chances are some of that light will hit his shoulders, top of his hat, etc. His edges would also start to blur from the light.
And, though it might make him harder to see, his front side would be more in silhouette due to standing in front of the light.
Nonetheless it impact and vision are still there. And gotta love the dutch angle shot; it just amplifies with all those geometric shapes also corresponding to the diagonals, don't it..
And mayhaps I'm being a bit biased, but it ~does~ almost have comic book dimensions, making this feel like an excellent would-be story with lots of scope and grittiness.
- my critique - the man still looks noticeably dropped into the shot. The lighting on his body ought more closely match the lighting right around him. There's a strong blast of light hitting the ground directly behind him; chances are some of that light will hit his shoulders, top of his hat, etc. His edges would also start to blur from the light.
And, though it might make him harder to see, his front side would be more in silhouette due to standing in front of the light.
Nonetheless it impact and vision are still there. And gotta love the dutch angle shot; it just amplifies with all those geometric shapes also corresponding to the diagonals, don't it..
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