This is a great pic! It's awesome seeing into the Shrine.
I am not a member so I can't do an official critique, but something about the colors is kind of weird in this one. I feel like my eyes are pulled everywhere and it's hard to focus in on one part of the image. That said, it's still a great photograph! The way the priest is just standing there makes it seem staged (I don't know if it is) which matches the formality and ritual of Shinto.